So, in spite of the fact that I'm replotting, I've decided to keep posting the excerpts that I have, in hopes of keeping things interested. Twice a week seems a bit often for my musings on the fictioneer's craft, especially for me, who has to come up with said musings. I'll be mostly culling bits from the main plot line, since it looks like the subplot is going to be torn down and rebuilt. Anyway, if you need catching up, check out "It Pays to be an English Major." Here we go...
Colin scrambled out from underneath the briars on the patch's far side, sliced in a hundred places but glad to be alive.
Or whatever it is I am, he thought.
He cou